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The
author's view of Florence Nightingale is that she is a
strong, caring person deeply stirred to help others, much
more than people know. He conveyed his conception of her to
the reader in a more subtle and artful way than just stating
facts, and did this through creative and descriptive diction
and imagery.
Throughout
reading the passage, I noticed the unique choices of diction
that Lytton Strachey used to subtly send the message that
she is an extremely caring person. For example, in line 6,
Strachey talks about her "
consecrating with her
goodness the dying soldiers couch
" sending the message
that she is practically glowing with good spirit or even
holiness. He could have merely said, "she cheered the
soldier up", but instead went with these more powerful and
unusual words to convey his true feelings about Florence
(this makes readers think about the meaning, too). Another
of the many examples of diction choice in this passage is
how he wrote, on line 12, "
a demon possessed her",
instead of just saying "she felt obligated to help". Once
again, his choice of stronger words really brings out his
full feelings about Florence.
Another
element that Strachey utilized to let his view of Florence
be known was imagery. Perhaps the passage's best example is
the last few words. Strachey compares her to an Eagle,
rejecting Florence's parents' view that she was a wild swan.
An Eagle is one of the most powerful, strong, free
creatures. The author is pointing out that although Florence
feels a deep obligation to help the less fortunate, she
remains a respectable and dignified person. Her feeling of a
need to constantly help others comes from deep within
it is very powerful and apparently will not be overcome by
laziness, selfishness, etc.
The
author's choice of words tells the reader what he thinks of
Florence (her being an extremely strong, caring, and hard
working person) in a more sophisticated, artful, and subtle
way, which also causes the reader to draw his or her own
conclusions. This allows each reader to have a slightly
different interpretation of the meaning
which
contributes to the entertainment and value of the
story.
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